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       1. ช่วยได้ค่ะ ทำให้รู้จักการใช้เทคโนโลยี มีความสะดวกในการส่งงาน
       2. ชอบค่ะ เป็นการฝึกทักษะด้านการเขียน การคิด วิเคราะห์
       3. ในช่วงแรกๆที่ยังไม่คล่องรู้สึกว่าเว็บใช้ยากนิดหน่อยค่ะ
       4. อยากให้มีตัวอย่างการฝึกเขียนให้มากขึ้นกว่านี้ค่ะ เพื่อจะได้มีความหลากหลายในการเปรียบเทียบข้อมูลค่ะ  และอยากให้เพิ่มเวลาการในการสอนให้มากกว่านี้ค่ะ (หนูว่าเวลาน้อยปายยยยย)

Second Draft:

 Solar cars

      Solar cars dependent on PV cells to convert sunlight into electricity to drive electric motors. It has four wheels and car shape.This limits solar cars to ultralight composite body to save weight.Solar cars are often fitted with gauges,to carefully monitor the car's energy consumption,solar energy capture and other parameters (Lynch, 2014). Controlled by a wireless system the driver to concentrate on driving, which can be dangerous in such a small, lightweight car. this car  around 2.5 million baht. One blog of energy is Works about 15 hours enough for  an average speed of 10-80 kilometers per hours. supplement battery pack and a proven charge controlling system have efficiency.I think that the solar car will be replaced the gasoline car in the next 15 years because it's environmentally friendly.

First Draft:

 

Solar car

      Solar cars dependent on PV cells to convert sunlight into electricity to drive electric motors. It has four wheels and car shape.This limits solar cars to ultralight composite body to save weight.Solar cars are often fitted with gauges,to carefully monitor the car's energy consumption,solar energy capture and other parameters. Controlled by a wireless system the driver to concentrate on driving, which can be dangerous in such a small, lightweight car. this car  around 2.5 million baht. One blog of energy is Works about 15 hours enough for  an average speed of 10-80 kilometers per hours. supplement battery pack and a proven charge controlling system have efficiency.


Reference:
Lynch, J.(2014), Power from sunlight: photovoltaics.
from https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Solar_car#References.

Outline:

What is this car name? Solar car.
What does it look like?It has four wheels and normal car shape.
What kind of fuel does it use?Solar cars dependent on PV cells to convert sunlight into electricity to drive electric motors.
How many kilometers per day?One blog of energy is works about 15 hours/day.
How much does it cost? this car  around 2.5 million baht.
What does benefits of solar car? This limits solar cars to ultralight composite body to save weight and lightweight car.
What is the In-text citation's name and year of this writing? Lynch, J.(2014)
What source in the reference list that the writer used?Power from sunlight: photovoltaics.
from https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Solar_car#References.

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- What is this car name?This name is H2O car.

- What does it look like?  It has three wheels and triangle shape. Water is needed as fuel.

- What kind of fuel does it use? Hydrogen from water is the main fuel necessary for this car.

- How many kilometers per hour? One liter of water is enough for one hour at an average        speed of two-hundred kilometers per hour.

- How much does it cost? I think this car will be sold around 1.4 million baht.

- What is the In-text citation's name and year of this writing? (Finnerty, 2016).

- What source in the reference list that the writer used? http://www.autoexpress.co.uk/car-news/93180/hydrogen-cars-new-government-funding-for-fuel-cell-vehicles.

Second Draft:

       Michael Fred Phelp is ranked as the most decorated Olympic in history.  He has 18 Olympic gold medals  in 2004. He is tall , smart , handsome and  swimming very well. He started training swimming since the age of 7 years. He is committed and effort  to train hard for participate in the Olympics this time. And I like him because him excelled and talented he has committed and efforts.  ^o^

 Michael Fred Phelps

Outline:

-What's his name? His name's Michael Fred Phelps.
-What does he look like? He is tall and handsome.
-What kind of sports he play? He swim very well.
-What has  been he sport success? He won 18 the Olympic gold medals in 2004.
-What do you like him? I like him because him excelled and talented.He has committed and efforts were finally rewarded greatly.

First Draft:

Michael Fred Phelp is ranked as the most decorated Olympian in history. He has 18 Olympic gold medals  in 2004.He started training at the North Baltimore Aquatic Club at Meadowbrook Aquatic and Fitness Center where his coach  recognized. Phelps’ talents and ferocious sense of competition then started an extreme training regime.He has committed and efforts were  rewarded greatly. Finally His goal in life.