Michael Fred Phelps

Outline:

-What's his name? His name's Michael Fred Phelps.
-What does he look like? He is tall and handsome.
-What kind of sports he play? He swim very well.
-What has  been he sport success? He won 18 the Olympic gold medals in 2004.
-What do you like him? I like him because him excelled and talented.He has committed and efforts were finally rewarded greatly.

First Draft:

Michael Fred Phelp is ranked as the most decorated Olympian in history. He has 18 Olympic gold medals  in 2004.He started training at the North Baltimore Aquatic Club at Meadowbrook Aquatic and Fitness Center where his coach  recognized. Phelps’ talents and ferocious sense of competition then started an extreme training regime.He has committed and efforts were  rewarded greatly. Finally His goal in life.