Second Draft:

       Michael Fred Phelp is ranked as the most decorated Olympic in history.  He has 18 Olympic gold medals  in 2004. He is tall , smart , handsome and  swimming very well. He started training swimming since the age of 7 years. He is committed and effort  to train hard for participate in the Olympics this time. And I like him because him excelled and talented he has committed and efforts.  ^o^